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Re: FanFictions
OLLA GUYS!
AS U SEE THERE IS NOT A SINGLE STORY HERE SO I THOUGHT WHY DONT I TRY IT I WILL BE STARTING FROM TOMORROW. Its a FANFICTION based on MJHT.The name of this fanfic will be FALLING IN LOVE.
AS U SEE THERE IS NOT A SINGLE STORY HERE SO I THOUGHT WHY DONT I TRY IT I WILL BE STARTING FROM TOMORROW. Its a FANFICTION based on MJHT.The name of this fanfic will be FALLING IN LOVE.
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Re: FanFictions
Tanu I'm waiting for your story please start fast.........
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HELLOOOO PEOPLE!!
Here's presenting to u The FIRST PART of
so here we are in the most beautiful place called "PARIS"...
paris is shown in the morning....its the mornin breeze and ther r a few people jogging in the park.....
we see the eifel tower....and all the beautiful greenery around it.....evrythin is very clam....all the french workers are opening thier stores...some are openin their bread store and some their french restaurant.....now a big house is shown....with servants working in the garden...
we go inside the house and we see butlers walkin around....and then we see one butler with a tray with orange juice and toast going up the stairs...he goes toward the bedroom and opens the door......he goes inside and he puts the tray on the side and says...
butler: good morning sir....here is ur toast and orange juice....
a person inside the cover of the bed sheet says...good moring in a very sleepy tone...
the butler leaves and the person inside the cover takes the cover off and we see the most handsom man in paris...he is the ceo of the fashion company called rivas.....samrat...
he just woke up and his hair is messy but cute...he has few hair comin down on his forehead....and he has a little smile on his face as he wakes up...
he looks at his breakfast and takes a sip of the juice and goes to the washroom...
meanwhile....in another house...same time a beautiful girl woke up....she is the best fashion designer in paris working for the divas....she is very stunning and gorgeous....she loves morning and as soon as she woke up she went outside to the garden and took a breath of the morning air....she was wearing her night gown and the morning air was brushing her hair and she closed her eyes and took a breath of the fresh oxygen.......and then suddenly she was interepted by some music...she looks around to see where the music comes from....and then she looks inside her house and knows who it is.....
it was her sis dia.....she is a very outgoin girl....she is very energetic and very bold yet very respective......
gunjan goes in dia's room and finds nupur on the bed dancing to the music in her night clothes....she was having a blast...she was flinging her hair evrywer....then gunjan went and turned off the music...
dia: are gunjan yeh kyun band kiya...
gunjan: dia ...yeh kya subha subha music laga diya...
dia: chill na gunjan...
gunjan: chalo ab tayaar ho jao..kam pe bhi to jaana hain...
dia: yes maam...( and she does a little salute)
gunjan just laughed..
gunjan: ill meet u in the breakfast table...
after a while gunjan comes downstairs...jeans and boots on the top on the jeans....a very cute top and a scarf....and a purse that would make her complete....she sits at the breakfast table...
gunjan(to herself): mhmm dia ab tak nahi ayi....har time ki tara woh tayaar hone mein bohoat time lagayegi....
dia: uhuu...mein a gayi...
gunjan: wow pehli baar time par...aaj suraj kaha se nikla hain...
dia: ha ha very funny...
and then they both sit and have some breakfast...they talk and hav a nice morning...they hav a healthy breakfast...and then they leave...
they head to the diva studio...
when they enter...evryone greets gunjan....she always feels welcome when she comes here...she already has people comin to her bringing designs and everything....
ok guys i know the part is too small but dont worry i will post it everyday!
now coming to comments do tell me honestly how u liked it! appreciation, criticization and suggestions all r welcome!
Here's presenting to u The FIRST PART of
so here we are in the most beautiful place called "PARIS"...
paris is shown in the morning....its the mornin breeze and ther r a few people jogging in the park.....
we see the eifel tower....and all the beautiful greenery around it.....evrythin is very clam....all the french workers are opening thier stores...some are openin their bread store and some their french restaurant.....now a big house is shown....with servants working in the garden...
we go inside the house and we see butlers walkin around....and then we see one butler with a tray with orange juice and toast going up the stairs...he goes toward the bedroom and opens the door......he goes inside and he puts the tray on the side and says...
butler: good morning sir....here is ur toast and orange juice....
a person inside the cover of the bed sheet says...good moring in a very sleepy tone...
the butler leaves and the person inside the cover takes the cover off and we see the most handsom man in paris...he is the ceo of the fashion company called rivas.....samrat...
he just woke up and his hair is messy but cute...he has few hair comin down on his forehead....and he has a little smile on his face as he wakes up...
he looks at his breakfast and takes a sip of the juice and goes to the washroom...
meanwhile....in another house...same time a beautiful girl woke up....she is the best fashion designer in paris working for the divas....she is very stunning and gorgeous....she loves morning and as soon as she woke up she went outside to the garden and took a breath of the morning air....she was wearing her night gown and the morning air was brushing her hair and she closed her eyes and took a breath of the fresh oxygen.......and then suddenly she was interepted by some music...she looks around to see where the music comes from....and then she looks inside her house and knows who it is.....
it was her sis dia.....she is a very outgoin girl....she is very energetic and very bold yet very respective......
gunjan goes in dia's room and finds nupur on the bed dancing to the music in her night clothes....she was having a blast...she was flinging her hair evrywer....then gunjan went and turned off the music...
dia: are gunjan yeh kyun band kiya...
gunjan: dia ...yeh kya subha subha music laga diya...
dia: chill na gunjan...
gunjan: chalo ab tayaar ho jao..kam pe bhi to jaana hain...
dia: yes maam...( and she does a little salute)
gunjan just laughed..
gunjan: ill meet u in the breakfast table...
after a while gunjan comes downstairs...jeans and boots on the top on the jeans....a very cute top and a scarf....and a purse that would make her complete....she sits at the breakfast table...
gunjan(to herself): mhmm dia ab tak nahi ayi....har time ki tara woh tayaar hone mein bohoat time lagayegi....
dia: uhuu...mein a gayi...
gunjan: wow pehli baar time par...aaj suraj kaha se nikla hain...
dia: ha ha very funny...
and then they both sit and have some breakfast...they talk and hav a nice morning...they hav a healthy breakfast...and then they leave...
they head to the diva studio...
when they enter...evryone greets gunjan....she always feels welcome when she comes here...she already has people comin to her bringing designs and everything....
ok guys i know the part is too small but dont worry i will post it everyday!
now coming to comments do tell me honestly how u liked it! appreciation, criticization and suggestions all r welcome!
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Re: FanFictions
SIS ITS AWESOME, TRUELY AWESOME, I FELT AS IF I WAS WATCHING SOME MOVIE & IT WAS ALLL HAPPENING IN FRONT OF MY EYES, JUST SUPERB SIS.
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Re: FanFictions
really correct dis
its awesome
+15pts
its awesome
+15pts
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Re: FanFictions
I am glad that di n bro liked it.
I will be posting the next part most probably tomorrow
I will be posting the next part most probably tomorrow
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Re: FanFictions
surely
u shuld
u shuld
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bhai i am changing the title of this topic dont mind
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PART 2
samrat sits into the car wearing his armaani suit and gucci watch....and leather boots....
he is in the car talkin on the phone discussing some important stuff....
he reaches his office...
when he enters evryone stands up and greets him...
he is their boss but he is very friendly and evryone calls him by his name instead of mr.shergil...
he enters his office and sits down...
after a while....banji comes in the office...
benji: hey dude...kya chal raha hain...
samrat: hey benji kuch nahi...tu bol..
benji: bas yaar pura din kharaab ja raha hain...
samrat: dude...ab din sirf shuru huya hain...
benji: hain par pata haina tujhe woh uday mera dimaag kha jata hai
samrat: benji ye toh new discovery hai yaar mujhe nahi pata tha tera bhi dimaag hai
benji; hahaha..very funny dude
samrat: i know....acha bata tujhe koi ladki mili kya india mein? opps sry dude mein bhul gaya tha tujhe ladki mein nahi ladko mein intrest hai sorry
benji: abe maru ga ek tu bhi shuru hogaya baki sab ki tarah
samrat laughs
and then mayank walks in...
mayank: hey u guys wont believe ke kya hua..
both: kya
mayank: meine nupur ko finally propose kar liya...
samrat: thank god yaar...tu to har din mera sar kha raha the ke mein nupur se pyaar karta hoon....ab tu woh to nahi karega...
benji: by the way mayank...yeh nupur hain kaun....tu to humesha uski baat karta hain...lekin kabhi dikhaya nahi...woh to humare saath college mein bhi nahi thi...
mayank: dont wry yaar mein milvauga...
scene shifts in the diva studio...
gunjan is the room doin some work where nupur walks in...
nupur: are yaar gunji tu believe nahi karegi ke kya huya...
gunjan: kya hua...(not reali interested...cause she has so much to do)
nupur: mayank ne muje propose kiya..
gunjan: (shocked) kya!!
nupur: haan aur meine haan bhi kar di...
gunjan: by the way nups yeh mayank hain kaun...tune to kabhi muje use milaya nahi....i mean college mein bhi nahi tha ...
nupur: haan mein use hamesha apne ghaar ke bahaar milti hoon....jabse humare company yaha shift hogaya hain...tabse mein use humesha bus stand aur waha milti hoon...
PLZZZ COMMENT GUYS I REALLY WANNA KNOW IF ITS GUD
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AWESOME SIS, YOU ROCK !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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wow story is superb
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Re: FanFictions
Tanu wrote:
PART 2
samrat sits into the car wearing his armaani suit and gucci watch....and leather boots....
he is in the car talkin on the phone discussing some important stuff....
he reaches his office...
when he enters evryone stands up and greets him...
he is their boss but he is very friendly and evryone calls him by his name instead of mr.shergil...
he enters his office and sits down...
after a while....banji comes in the office...
benji: hey dude...kya chal raha hain...
samrat: hey benji kuch nahi...tu bol..
benji: bas yaar pura din kharaab ja raha hain...
samrat: dude...ab din sirf shuru huya hain...
benji: hain par pata haina tujhe woh uday mera dimaag kha jata hai
samrat: benji ye toh new discovery hai yaar mujhe nahi pata tha tera bhi dimaag hai
benji; hahaha..very funny dude
samrat: i know....acha bata tujhe koi ladki mili kya india mein? opps sry dude mein bhul gaya tha tujhe ladki mein nahi ladko mein intrest hai sorry
benji: abe maru ga ek tu bhi shuru hogaya baki sab ki tarah
samrat laughs
and then mayank walks in...
mayank: hey u guys wont believe ke kya hua..
both: kya
mayank: meine nupur ko finally propose kar liya...
samrat: thank god yaar...tu to har din mera sar kha raha the ke mein nupur se pyaar karta hoon....ab tu woh to nahi karega...
benji: by the way mayank...yeh nupur hain kaun....tu to humesha uski baat karta hain...lekin kabhi dikhaya nahi...woh to humare saath college mein bhi nahi thi...
mayank: dont wry yaar mein milvauga...
scene shifts in the diva studio...
gunjan is the room doin some work where nupur walks in...
nupur: are yaar gunji tu believe nahi karegi ke kya huya...
gunjan: kya hua...(not reali interested...cause she has so much to do)
nupur: mayank ne muje propose kiya..
gunjan: (shocked) kya!!
nupur: haan aur meine haan bhi kar di...
gunjan: by the way nups yeh mayank hain kaun...tune to kabhi muje use milaya nahi....i mean college mein bhi nahi tha ...
nupur: haan mein use hamesha apne ghaar ke bahaar milti hoon....jabse humare company yaha shift hogaya hain...tabse mein use humesha bus stand aur waha milti hoon...
PLZZZ COMMENT GUYS I REALLY WANNA KNOW IF ITS GUD
HEY TANU UR SECOND PART IS LIKE TOO AWESOME
so for dat gr8 and +20pts
all da best
do post the next part as soon as possible
okies
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